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First Issue of "The Odd Couple". Two characters: Andrea (Andy), and Keiora. Keiora is a party animal, and Andy just wants to crack down on her studies and get school over with.

Currently open to suggestions on story developement.

thank you, and enjoy!
- Red Shiba

(this panel was drawn and written by Red Shiba)
(drawn in theGimp)

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I re-wrote this one and fixed the spelling errors. Now, if you didn't get it, there was a reference to Wiley Coyote and Road Runner.
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~fire-doused Oct 13, 2011
Wile E. Coyote... bud. Also, the spelling is Chemistry (not Chemestry). Hope that helps. :)

Interesting comic anyway! =)

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~ill-lushtrator Dec 22, 2010
This, thus, sets up the ever-going (and growing) relationship between two roommates and probably some late-night partying shenanigans in campus. ;D

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~starvingartistcomics Aug 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
two years and almost 70 comic strips later ;D so far, your predictions are correct!

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~Moreuse Aug 17, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol never caught the first page before.
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=DJCoulz Mar 22, 2010   Digital Artist
Man that second frame just screams Jube Chan XD

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Whatever, dude. Irrelevant.

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~starvingartistcomics Mar 22, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
i didn't notice. totally from the first episode when she's about to walk into the principles office.

also, my favorite anime series of all time! :3

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"Having left his home land, he never yields, never retreats, and never regrets. He faces forward and never looks back! He's manly! He's tenacious!" - Gurren Lagaan

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~plangkye Oct 3, 2009
I've read what you have so far here, and I only have one suggestion. The narrative boxes in panel two seem awkward the way you've split them up - it would be better if the entire sentence of "I wonder what kind of person my roommate is..." were all in one box, instead of being broken up, and the second box contain only the speculation on possibilities. The way it is now, it seems very disjointed, like the character's brain suddenly stopped all activity for several seconds.

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Would you care for a cup of tea with your egg?
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~starvingartistcomics Oct 3, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah. I plan on redoing that entire first panel. but thanks for the critique! :) I kinda wasn't sure how to bring all of that together, so when i redo it, I'll work on that, as well.

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"Having left his home land, he never yields, never retreats, and never regrets. He faces forward and never looks back! He's manly! He's tenacious!" - Gurren Lagaan

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~plangkye Oct 3, 2009
Generally it's not a good idea to break up a sentence in dialogue or narrative between two bubbles or boxes unless you want to indicate a significant pause. :)

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~starvingartistcomics Oct 3, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
maybe i did. DUN DUN DUUUNNNNN :P

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My Official Comics Website [link]
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